
Wow. This is what an editor let's his assistant write into a short story that gets a green light?
This is the sort of thing that would pretty much be laughed out of the office if submitted by anyone else...and rightly so. A three-way (especially one involving a ring-generated woman) is the domain of porn-ish fanfic.


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